You should include more lines to your poem. There isn't much in your three simple lines. It seems as though you rushed this post.
I agree with Henley. It doesn't seem like you spent that much time on it, you should make it longer then three lines. But, I assume this is a hiku right?
You should include more lines to your poem. There isn't much in your three simple lines. It seems as though you rushed this post.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Henley. It doesn't seem like you spent that much time on it, you should make it longer then three lines. But, I assume this is a hiku right?
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